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I'm sitting here alone
In the middle of this very big city
I sit and look out the window of this very small room
This night time breeze consoles me
While there are so many lights
This city is still so alive
Strange and uncomfortable
Yet the memory of you brings me comfort
She who isn't mine
Yet I'll sit here and count the days until I see you
Just like I'd count the stars until I fell asleep.
Was so tired and depressed when I wrote this in the motel room during FanimeCon.
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Rainbow-Artist Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can see the city image when reading this poem. Well written!
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Before-I-Sleep Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, glad you like it so much. :heart:
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kjtgp1 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
awww
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Before-I-Sleep Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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UnderneathTheBlack Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's a great poem, of feeling comfort even though you are somewhere so vast and unfamiliar. Hope you're feeling better now though!
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Before-I-Sleep Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I am thanks, I'm glad that you like my poem. :D
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Yuzu2395 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:iconhugplz:
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Before-I-Sleep Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:cuddle:
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mangamegbe Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011
Sound like a sad mood indeed.
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Before-I-Sleep Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah it was at the time.
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